The mark of the beast swept in
With a crimson spray vessel
A lonely widow, a young couple
The blackness swept
While we slept
A ghostly finger came sweeping
Across the brick yards.
Agnostic, Acrostic, shameful ways.
Now the dusk owl is perched
Upon his lamb
Seeking to consider whom he might find
A boy scout flashlight in hand.
Gangs, graffiti, munchkins all
Nary a fear
As he trembles.
Not to be jittery
Of the red smears
Or the jeers
As the night prey
Crumbles.
the metaphorical connection between darkness and piracy kind of took me away. i enjoyed the rhythmic swiftness in it and would want to read more. connect with me on my blog Rhythmic Rhymes @http://minivercheevy.blogspot.com
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